the bar chart below shows the percentage of australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart compares the proportion of males and females in Australia in 6 different age groups who did exercise on a regular basis in the year 2010.
overall, it is noticeable that through all the age group except one, 15 to 24, ratio of females who took exercise regularly recorded higher than males. meanwhile, both group had almost same rate less then 1% of gap in the age group 65 and over.
On the one hand, percentage of Australian men aged 15 to 24 reached at peak with 52.8%, followed by aged 25-24 at 42.2%. It kept fell down to 39.5%, the lowest amount in the age group 35 to 44, almost around 13% lower rate than the highest. Meanwhile from the age 45, men saw upward trend till aged 65 and over group while proportion was still lower than the youngest age group.
On the other hand, the most australian women those who enjoyed regular outdoor activities were aged 45 to 54. This age group had the highest rate at 53.3%. The age group 35-44, 45-54, and 55-64 had similar figures, less than 1% gap each others at 52.5%, 53.3% and 53% respectively.
Meanwhile, from the age 65, ratio of both men and women saw almost same at 46.7% and 47.1%, only 0.4% of difference.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...e on a regular basis in the year 2010. overall, it is noticeable that through all the ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...e regularly recorded higher than males. meanwhile, both group had almost same rate less t...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e, both group had almost same rate less then 1% of gap in the age group 65 and over....
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...around 13% lower rate than the highest. Meanwhile from the age 45, men saw upward trend t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45161290323 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2377910552 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585253456221 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4287274614 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337769639878 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143780593831 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878332050663 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198572001425 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880242274118 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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