The bar chart depict the percentage of Australian male and female from various age groups who engaged in physical activity on a regular basis in 2010. Overall, it is noticeable that Australian male who engaged the most were aged 15 to 24, where Australian female who did the most were from age 45 to 54.
In detail, it can be seen that female who did physical activity on a regular basis were mostly aged 45 to 54, at 53.3%. Next, the category was followed by those aged 55 to 64 and 35 to 44, who had similar percentage, at 53% and 52.5%, respectively. Then, female aged 25 to 34 came after those age groups, at 48.9%. Lastly, women aged 15 to 24 and 65 and over became the least age groups who exercised regularly, at 47.7% and 47.1%, respectively.
Meanwhile, male who exercised regularly the most were those aged 15 to 24, at 52.8%. Then, the next age group who exercised regularly were those aged 65 and over, at 46.7%. After that, male aged 55 to 64 and 45 to 54 stood at 45.1% and 43.1%, respectively. Lastly, men aged 25 to 34 and 35 to 44 were the least age groups who did physical activity on a daily basis, at 42.2% and 39.5%, respectively.
- the plans below show a public park when it was first opened in 1920 and the same park today Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 36
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research business and the academic world Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both the views and give o 61
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 67
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 67
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: DID_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...here Australian female who did the most were from age 45 to 54. In detail, it can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39534883721 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50287017503 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460465116279 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9866637024 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346385048036 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172610952372 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117748190935 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275860046059 0.15604864568 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736147756377 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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