The bar chart below depict the proportion of Australian males and females in various age category who exercised regularly in 2010. Overall, it is noticeable that most males who trained on a regular basis were those aged 15 to 24, while most females who worked out habitually were those in age group of 45 to 54.
In detail, highest proportion of male who exercised regularly was found in male aged 15 to 24, at 52.8%. This number was then followed by age group 65 and over, and 55 to 64, which has close percentage, at 46.7% and 45.1%, respectively. Next, male aged 45 to 54 and 25 to 34 came at the 4th and 5th place, which accounted at 43.1% and 42.2%, respectively. Lastly, male aged 35 to 44 became the least age group for male who trained on a daily basis, at 39.5%.
Meanwhile, highest percentage for female who trained on a daily basis was those in age category of 45 to 54, at 53.3%. This category was then followed with female in age group of 55 to 64 and 35 to 44 which each had close percentage, at 53% and 52.5%, consecutively. Next, female aged 25 to 34 was at the next place which accounted for 48.9%. Lastly, female in age category of 15 to 24 and 65 and over became the least female categories who trained regularly, where each accounted for 47.7% and 47.1%, respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , the highest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44117647059 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56631900215 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453781512605 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4534070344 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.7 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191963909604 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102077691713 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861188771759 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161734069142 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08421893202 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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