The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart compares the proportion of Australian males and females in six age categories who exercised daily physical activity in 2010.
Overall, women exercised more than men. From 15 to 24 years old, the volume of men in Australia did more physical activity than women. However, in other age groups, women accounted for a higher percentage of did daily physical activity than men.
In the youngest age categories (15 to 24), about 52,8% of Australian men but only 47.7% of women exercised regular physical activity. However, the ages 25 to 34 saw a slight increase in the percentage of female physical activity to around 48.9%. By contrast, the figure for male regular physical activity dropped by about 10% in the same age group. From 35 to 44 age categories, women exercised daily physical activity rose steadily to 52.5%, whereas male exercised basis physical activity took up 39.5%.
Turning to the three remaining groups, the figure for male physical activity rose to 43.1%, while the proportion of female basis physical activity reached a peak, at 53.3%. the percentage of men and women physical activity stood at 45.1% and 53% respectively. Finally, Men and women aged 65 and over who did regular physical activity made up a similar percentage, at approximately 47%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07582938389 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68018592627 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488151658768 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3797461036 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3636363636 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466802999179 0.215688989381 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21053966254 0.103423049105 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686679038105 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308077382966 0.15604864568 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137881454218 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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