Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required?
In the digital age, demand for online shopping grow dramatically. While this tendency negatively affects the environment. It is beneficial for increasing job opportunities.
On the one hand, e-commerce development caused increasing in non-recyclable packages. To be more specific, online goods need a lot of paper boxes and bubble wrap. This leads to a large number of trees that get cut to make paper boxes. Mean that it does not only cause a decrease in green cover density but also an increase in environmental issues such as soil erosion, climate change, and so on. While bubble wrap is kind of plastic that takes up to hundreds of years to fully decompose, it is harm for to species. For example, if fish and marine species get entangled in plastic, it will affect on breathing process of species.
On the other hand, online commerce offers people more job opportunities. To begin with, the career can be expanded related to maintaining web systems, such as software engineer, designer, and so on. In fact, it is clear that their salary is more than two or three times higher than other jobs. In addition, it also makes new jobs such as influencer and live streamer. They play a vital role in marketing and advertisements by using and reviewing products of the agency on online platforms.
In conclusion, although e-commerce has a negative impact on the environment, it also is a chance for people who are catching up with this trend. Besides, I hope that the government will give policies to protect the environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93798449612 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89410068258 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631782945736 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4085975491 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.625 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170471833822 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545592401018 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041717253335 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108422855753 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631609668344 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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