Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required?
Hitherto, globalization has led to the digitalization of trading ways, and the question of what online shopping can affect humans surroundings and occupation by types has been raising public attention. While many people lament that the impact of this way of shopping is insignificant on the selling market and nature, I oppose this view by giving some rational evidence.
First and foremost, online shopping wields a great impact on the environment. It is conspicuous that the more development of modern shopping types, the more fresh air is created. People are not required to directly go to the shop due to the convenience of the technology, this means the amount of vehicles on the street will remarkably reduce, so the air is less damaged by the poisonous gas and stably recover the purest form. Furthermore, with the development of online shopping, people's renting surface rate will drop significantly, creating less domestic waste and heightening the environment standard. A vivid example is that in this day and age, due to the Covid 19 pandemic, scientists recorded the fastest nature’s resilience on Earth.
Beside these benefits, online shopping also affects the global economy. From an economic standpoint, shop’s founders can avoid bankruptcy by not paying overhead costs such as renting, domestic cost,.... On top of that, digital selling can reduce the unemployment’s rate by not only creating huge job opportunities for deliverers, but also heightening the quality of this occupation. Despite the huge benefits, there are foreseeable drawbacks of online shopping. People will pay less attention to the traditional shops due to the appeal of digital ones, so the prevailing host can face the vanishing from the selling market.
In conclusion, shopping online has a remarkable impact on both nature and the economy fields
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ead costs such as renting, domestic cost,.... On top of that, digital selling can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35051546392 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00109607088 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8270595893 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.769230769 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209408942703 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747171716707 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355980748139 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125874834614 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170666367857 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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