Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required?
Hitherto, globalization has led to the digitalization of trading ways, and the question of what online shopping can affect humans surroundings and occupation by types has been raising public attention. While many people lament that the impact of this way of shopping is insignificant on the selling market and nature, I oppose this view by giving some rational evidence.
First and foremost, online shopping wields a great impact on the environment. It is conspicuous that the more development of modern shopping types is, the fresher the air is. It is unnecessary for shoppers to visit the shop in person due to the convenience of the technology, this means the number of vehicles on the street will remarkably reduce, so the air is less damaged by the greenhouse gases and stably recovers its purest form. Furthermore, with the development of online shopping, the rate of tenants for business seems to slump significantly, creating less domestic waste and heightening the environment standard. A vivid example is that in this day and age, due to the Covid 19 pandemic, scientists recorded the fastest nature’s resilience on Earth.
Beside these benefits, online shopping also affects the global economy. From an economic standpoint, shop’s founders can avoid bankruptcy by not paying overhead costs such as renting, domestic cost,etc.. On top of that, digital selling can plunge the unemployment rate by not only creating huge job opportunities for deliverers, but also consolidating the quality of this occupation. Notwithstanding the huge advantages mentioned, there are foreseeable drawbacks of online shopping. Buyers will pay less attention to the traditional shops due to the appeal of digital ones, so the prevailing host can face the vanishing from the selling market.
In conclusion, shopping online has a remarkable impact on both nature and the economy field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35810810811 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06216782758 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8757061761 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198648471596 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07184716577 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360523168008 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121278862982 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151710467546 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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