The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian men and women in different age groups who spent time on regular physical activity in 2010.
Overall, it can be seen from the chart that the figures for women doing exercises were higher than the figure for men doing regular physical activity, except for the figure for Australian men from 15 to 24 years old.
According to the data, Australian women who aged 45 to 54 spent time doing physical activity the most, with 53,3 percent, followed by women in 35 to 44 years old group and 55 to 64 group, with 52,5 percent and 53 percent respectively. there were 48,9 percent of women who are in 25 to 34 age group did regular exercises. The percentage of women in teenagers and old people group were the lowest and they were almost the same, with 47,7 percent and 47,1 percent respectively.
The percentage of men doing physical activity every day in 2010 were 52,8 percent, which was the highest proportion of men. The figure for males spending time doing exercises who aged 35 to 44 was the lowest, with 39,5 percent. The proportion of males who did regular physical activity in 25 to 34 age group, 45 to 54 age group, 55 to 64 age group and old people group were 42,2 percent, 43,1 percent, 45,1 percent and 46,7 percent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...,5 percent and 53 percent respectively. there were 48,9 percent of women who are in 2...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hich was the highest proportion of men. The figure for males spending time doing ex...
^^^
Line 4, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o 44 was the lowest, with 39,5 percent. The proportion of males who did regular phy...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60964912281 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42042882251 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434210526316 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2699656232 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.375 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399567745721 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226829932932 0.103423049105 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164195612348 0.0843802449381 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317807962219 0.15604864568 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183525856728 0.0819641961636 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.