The data depicts the percentage of people in the Great Britain who lived independently by age and gender during the period of 2004-2005. Overall, both sexes lived by themselves as they grow older and less teenagers to middle-aged females did than males, although this trend reversed as age increased.
Looking at the graph, females who aged 75 and over had the contribution of approximately 59% while the percentage for male was around 27%. Additionally, the 65-74 age group saw a similar trend as the percentage of alone females almost doubled comparing to the percentage of alone males, which was about 32% and 17% respectively.
In contrast, there were more males who chose to live alone at lower ages. There was a slightly higher percentage of males than females who lived by themselves in the 16-24 and 45-64 age groups with about 5% and 17%, while for females it was 4% and 15% all respectively. It is worth noticing that the percentage of males who lived alone stabilized since the age of 25-44 with approximately 15%, whereas percent for female were 9%
- The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005 82
- The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005 73
- El Nino is the name of warm ocean current that affects weather of the Pacific Ocean The diagrams compare the normal conditions in the Pacific with El Nino Conditions 89
- consumption of fast food in the UK 73
- The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education.The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.Write a report for a university lecturer,descr 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun teenagers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ed by themselves as they grow older and less teenagers to middle-aged females did th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89502762431 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76818185908 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574585635359 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8859728498 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.571428571 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193050249135 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1079186668 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703260542978 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148108530872 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591922331557 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.