The bar chart below shows the percentage of people living alone in 5 different age group in the USA between 1850 and 2000.
The chart compares the proportion of citizens living alone in 5 age groups from 17 to 64 years old in America during a 150 – year period since 1850.
Overall, the figure for people living alone increased gradually through the period surveyed in all age groups and that for people aged 55 – 64 was generally the highest. Units are measured in percentages.
In 1850, only figures of three age groups were given. Only around 2% of people aged 37 – 46 and those aged 47 - 54 lived alone, about 1% lower compared to those aged 55 – 64. During the next 50 years, in 1900, the proportion of citizens living alone from 27 – 36 years old was just above 2%, while that in 37 – 46 age group remained unchanged. Figures for those in 47 – 54 and 55 – 64 saw a slight increase of approximately 1% and 2% respectively.
A new pattern, people aged 17 – 26, emerged in 1950, with the percentage of those living alone in all age groups went up sharply. However, figures for people who lived alone in 2000 saw a significant increase. The figure for 17 – 26 age group increased sharply to 5%, compared with just around 2% in 1950. The percentage of those living alone in 37 – 46 age group was followed by those aged 27 – 36, stood at 7% and 8%, respectively. The proportion of people living alone aged 47 – 54 was almost 4 times higher than that in 1950, at 13%; whereas the percentage for those who lived alone in the 55 – 64 age group nearly doubled to reach the high peak at 17%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 435, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 281.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34163701068 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3763204854 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444839857651 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6946160962 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328094535521 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149262650784 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807541598462 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223479870903 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051515456229 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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