The Bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams by subject and gender during the period 2010 2011

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The Bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011

The Bar graph illustrates the total percentage of Men and Women passed the competency exams on different subject in secondary education in 2010 to 2011.

Overall, among the girls computer science was the highest percentage of subject they got in competency exams. While the boys highest subject percentage was the Mathematics and it follows by a different subject during the one year of period.

In female, computer was the highest percentage among all the subject which was exact 56.3%. It followed by Mathematics for 49.2% and it had a difference only of about 2% in foreign languages. Physics was 36.7% a difference of around 6% in foreign languages. The least percentages were chemistry, history and geography approximately below 30%.

In male, the highest subject was Mathematics which was 48.4%. It only had a difference of around 2% in foreign languages for exact 46.8%. Whereas, computer science got 42.1% and the other subjects like physics, geography, history and chemistry only got for about below 34% in the years 2010-2011, respectively.

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Average: 7.7 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30769230769 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87321826788 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514792899408 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.455465023 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207152941021 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867954044504 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804920807241 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154856692854 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771580877081 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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