In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, there are least of young individuals are reading the newspapers and they are not following the news on television. There are some causes of this kind of behavior and as a person there might be a good solutions for everything.
In our modern society today some of young people did not read newspapers or even watching news on television. Perhaps the causes of this are online games, movies that are highly famous in the cinema, Korean dramas and other films that are not related to the news today. Teenagers are not updated to the news because of doing something that is not relevant for their schools. For instance, their teacher or professor gave an assignment or home work for their students about news in global warming and interruption of water that all people experience it in some countries. Young men and women did not make their assign home work because they are not interested and updated to the topic which is happen screen in television and even posted it in newspapers.
On the other hand, the solution for this is the guidance and supervision of their parents. Parents should advise them on how to limit the use of gadgets and watching the famous movies or films that is not relevant to their studies. There should be a discipline on how to have a time management for watching and reading newspapers and to do their favorite things.
In conclusion, not only young people should have a disciplined in reading and watching news in television. Adults also know how to read newspapers so that the young people have their motivation because they can learn it in an adults.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'solution'?
Suggestion: solution
...r and as a person there might be a good solutions for everything. In our modern societ...
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Line 3, column 694, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...ested and updated to the topic which is happen screen in television and even posted it...
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Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an adult' or simply 'adults'?
Suggestion: an adult; adults
...motivation because they can learn it in an adults. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93501805054 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5479028305 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462093862816 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2232107396 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208419091213 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910719450442 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522502400183 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14725137053 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484453767015 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.