Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development.
These days lots of people conversing each other with the use of technology. This might be a problem to anyone but others said this could be benefited to them specially to those individual far from their families or loved ones.
In our modern society high technology has become world wide used by the individuals. They use this for some kind of communication for example the OFWs they are working abroad to finance their families need. They used a laptops, cellphones and tablets to create video calls form to each other on the screen. With this kind of communication they feel happy and much more stronger because they can not see, touch or hug in person but seeing their family or loved ones only on the screen of their gadgets they feel it as a whole. The technology can really affect people's lives it can give them joy, happiness and fulfillment even though they are far from each other. In Addition, wide range of technology can use also in business such as call center company. People would not have to go in other countries just to be a certified business outsourcing company with the help of technology they can do that to their own country as long as they provide a budget to establish and organize.
On the other hand, there is always a positive and negative side in modern technology. The positive side it is a way to create a communication of all people around the world. Technology is good for business too example of that is computer shop or internet cafe. People will used this because some of them can not afford to buy computers so they will go to computer shop rent the computer with wi-fi
on it and rent for more than 2 hours. While the negative side of this is addiction. They have got addicted of using technologies and sometimes they used it in the wrong way. That is why there is a need of supervision specially to those underage individuals.
In summary, people might get used to modern technology because this is need in work, study and business. Individuals should use this properly in moderation because one wrong move of using this it can be harmful to anybody.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...dern society high technology has become world wide used by the individuals. They use this ...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...dern society high technology has become world wide used by the individuals. They use this ...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a laptop' or simply 'laptops'?
Suggestion: a laptop; laptops
... finance their families need. They used a laptops, cellphones and tablets to create video...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
... communication they feel happy and much more stronger because they can not see, touch or hug ...
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Line 6, column 274, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...uter shop or internet cafe. People will used this because some of them can not affor...
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Line 6, column 398, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mputer shop rent the computer with wi-fi on it and rent for more than 2 hours. Wh...
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Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... on it and rent for more than 2 hours. While the negative side of this is addiction....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, while, for example, in addition, in summary, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75335120643 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5376832763 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485254691689 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4669475647 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232355643417 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881023048311 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590899718047 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145394184592 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039112324883 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.