The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011 The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in this one person households

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and
women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart
compares the numbers of bedrooms in this one-person
households.

The given bar chart details the comparative study of males and females under different age-groups, who stayed alone in England in the year 2011, while the pie-chart provides the proportion of bedrooms in their respective households.

Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that across all the age-groups, more females than males stayed all alone. Also, the majority of people preferred a two-bedroom house.

According to the given illustration, men in the age-group 16 to 49 ranged between 53% and 63%, who lived without any partner as compared to fewer females(below 47%). Moreover, although the age-group 50 to 64 recorded an equal number for each sex, more than three-fourth of the total were females at the age 65 and above.

Turning to the pie-chart, more than 3 out of 10 households had 2 bedrooms. Further, whilst with very close proportion, one and three bedrooms set accounted for 28% and 29.8% respectively, just 5.3% came out to be as a 4-bedroom set. However, 5 or more bedrooms made up the least proportion of only 1.4%.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0625 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88300068046 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704545454545 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4412696013 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.375 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310126527695 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112395926665 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954960708386 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168891317158 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11037252538 0.0819641961636 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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