Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Essay topics:

Families who send their children to private schools should not be
required to pay taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With the expansion of privatization, it is often seen that the masses rely mostly on private schools for a holistic educational experience. In this context, many people are of the view that tax formalities should be lifted from the shoulders of those who spend a hefty amount in private schools and are not in need of public educational services. However, I am in discord with the given statement and think that the taxation system should be followed strictly to enrich and develop the existing government school structure. This essay would endeavor to shed some light on numerous factors in support of my viewpoint.

To begin with, we should never forget the common saying that each child has the right to acquire equal educational opportunities. Although children from wealthy families have access to use the best educational facilities, less fortunate lack this experience. In such a scenario, running away from paying taxes may have an adverse bearing on society's upliftment. For example, taxing is an indispensable part of the government's fund resources, which is further utilized for producing effective and equal educational rights. Hence, for a burgeoning economy, everyone should stand in support of the government.

Another supporting justification results in revolutionizing the present education system. As private schools are accommodated with the latest technologies, well-equipped lab materials, and the best infrastructure, the same suffers a lot within the public system due to lack of funds. With the freedom of evading taxes, families indirectly may be creating a hindrance on the path of a progressive and exploratory economy. For instance, children from poor families will remain ignorant of new digitization and high-tech techniques.

To conclude, while people who support private education argue about paying taxes to be used in favor of the government schools, I believe that the same is highly needed to gobble up the ingrained educational inequality to facilitate those who can not avail of special facilities otherwise.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47021943574 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08145527215 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601880877743 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4216343536 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.642857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34329018159 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104714097854 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463067578043 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200036314722 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486055305648 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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