The figure shows the accident reduction of five motorway after introducing an extra lane.
As you consider in M4 we have the most amount of reduction some thing about more than two times reduction ( which letter M stand for Motorway in this article )
The M2 and M5 are the bridge water with most traffic accident per kilometer something about 17 occur.
It's obvious that adding extra lane goes very well for M5 but for M2 it's not very efficient.
After M2 and M5 the next motorway with most traffic accident is M1which is about 13 accidents per kilometer and by adding new lane we achieve more than 50 percent of reduction in traffic accident.
M2 is the one with the less traffic accident and in addition its reduction is exactly 50%.
we could see in most cases except the M2 we obtain good result in traffic accident reduction by adding one new lane but for motorway 2 we need another way to reduce traffic accident in.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Kaur sandeep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure shows the accident reduction of five motorway after introducing an extra lane...
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Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'motorway' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'motorways'.
Suggestion: motorways
...e shows the accident reduction of five motorway after introducing an extra lane. As yo...
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Line 2, column 60, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...M4 we have the most amount of reduction some thing about more than two times reduction wh...
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Suggestion:
...hing about more than two times reduction which letter M stand for Motorway in thi...
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...ter M stand for Motorway in this article The M2 and M5 are the bridge water with ...
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Suggestion: We
...addition its reduction is exactly 50%. we could see in most cases except the M2 w...
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... most cases except the M2 we obtain good result in traffic accident reduction by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, in addition, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57831325301 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30700083808 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0363956887 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229163428265 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145239297867 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614834354465 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130887123558 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660059323199 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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