The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart compares the highest ranked ten countries in the production and consumption of electric power in 2014.

It is clear that China and the United States were by far the most important manufacturers and consumers of electricity during 2014, while the Korean Republic ranked last. Germany was the only country to use more electric power than it generates.

China was the top producer of electric energy with 5398 billion kWh and the number one consumer with 5322 billion. The United States came second in rank with 4099 kWh production and consumption that is lower by about 233 billion.

Whereas Russia and Japan ranked third and fourth with around 1000 billion kWh of electric energy generated and used. The corresponding figures for India, Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany were significantly lower than the top two. The Korean Republic had the lowest figures for both activities at about 485 and 449 billion kWh respectively which is about 10 times less than that of China.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, third, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08536585366 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52064645212 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5726313579 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253809629348 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123475473088 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145185180362 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200603623388 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175206548444 0.0819641961636 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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