The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics: The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given bar chart ranks the top 10 electricity producer and consumer country during 2014 in terms of billions of kWh.

At first sight, China and the USA led by far the other eight countries both in the production and in the consumption.

China, indeed, produces and consumes almost the same amount of electricity, roughly 5300 billion kWh. On the contrary, the USA has a more significant surplus, seeing that the generated electrical energy reached 4000 billion kWh, while the usage stopped to about 3800 billion.

The remaining countries in the ranking had much less production and consumption if compared to the two nations taken into account in the previous paragraph. None of them exceeded 1000 billion kWh neither in generation nor in use, excluding Russia whose statistics surpasses this number by little. Moreover, any of them, at the end of the year, have a surplus between production and consumption, except in Germany.

To sum up, China and the United States together produce and consume more electricity than all the other eight countries and among them all, only Germany need to import electricity from abroad.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, while, on the contrary, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14594594595 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6532447712 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681081081081 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0971379741 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.666666667 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130239789374 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647728280989 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622648033673 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082158465191 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619333560338 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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