The bar chart belows the percentage of people in Britain living alone by age and sex in 2004/2005.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph shows the percentage of people in Great Britain who live alone by age, also, gender in 2004 and 2005.
As can be seen from the figure, along with the age ascension, the number of alone people both genders increased significantly. Particularly, the rate of alone women respect to age is noticable. There was only under 5% of living alone female in the age 16-24, whereas it accounted for approximately 59% of whose in the age of 75 and over. Likewise, percentage of alone men also rose, with the increase of age, but at the slower rate compared to of alone women. More specific, there was just over 5% of living alone men, in the age 16-24, and peaked at 28%, in the age 75 and over.
Compared between two gender's trend, amount of alone men in the age from 16 to 74 was higher than of women. However,from the age of 65 up, the number of women soared gradually and made a big difference to the number of alone men.
Overall, in 2004 and 2005, living alone people proprtion increased by aging. In addition, the ratio in number of alone women and men also jumped drammatic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , from
... to 74 was higher than of women. However,from the age of 65 up, the number of women s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, so, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46231155779 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4482936021 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51256281407 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9601752915 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.8 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236367985258 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121937875568 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861107668487 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187252406876 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946026645292 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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