Bar Chart Owned and Rented Households

Essay topics:

Bar Chart Owned and Rented Households

The chart illustrates the households owning and renting living place in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011; all data are presented in percentage.

Overall, while we can see negative trend in rented accommodation between 1918 and 2011, there is positive co-relation in owned living place for the same period.

The percentage share of households in owned accommodation was kept on increasing till 2001, and small drop of approximate 5% in 2011 for the same category. However, no change in owned accommodation between 1939 and 1953, which remained same at a percentage share of 32%.

In contrast, the people living in rented places were decreasing since 1918 until 2001, and saw a slight increase of 3% in 2011 compare to last sample data i.e. in 2001. Like household in owned accommodation, the household in rented accommodation did not changed between 1939 to 1953; but the share of rented places were much higher that owned accommodation from the same period. Interestingly, the percentage share of both category was same in 1971.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ame period. The percentage share of households in owned accommodation was ke...
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Line 13, column 255, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
...usehold in rented accommodation did not changed between 1939 to 1953; but the share of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9069121776 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6181823165 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.714285714 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283693871553 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141085899677 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117819839869 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194874826286 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826079828573 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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