The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003 and projections for 2050

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050.

The given diagram gives information about the proportion of the total world population in 4 countries namely India, China, USA and Japan in 3 time periods: 1950, 2003 and 2050 with future predicion.

Overall, it can be seen the population of the countries changed dramatically over the course and it is estimated this will continue. Although China had the most residents in 1950, there was a prediction than this will be changed by India.

In 1950, Japan had the least population (approximately 5 percent) of the total. This had decreased slightly by 2002 whereas, it is anticipated it wll halved to about 1 percent by 2050. Furthermore, the population of the USA saw a sharp dip from about 7 percent to 5 percent by 2050, also thiis percentage estimated will remained stable by 2050.

In terms of Chine, it held about quater percent of popultion in 1950, whereas, by 2050 it is estimated that this proportion will have plunged to 15 percent. By contrast, India had this proportion in 1950, while it is predicted this percantage will increase steemly to just under 20 percent by 2050.

Votes
Average: 7.7 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'remain'
Suggestion: remain
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87096774194 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77181693648 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7910603363 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214986325243 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108020077629 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718492290037 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146187111149 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749504801551 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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