The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003 and projections for 2050

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050.

The rendered bar graph illustrates the percentum of the global population in different countries( like India, China, USA and Japan ) in 1950 and 2003, and predicted figures for 2050.

In an overview, the figures for the proportion of World population decreased for all countries except India. Additionally, India is the only country where the proportion of world population is expected to increased by 2050.

After having a glimpse it can be given clearly seen that India had 15% proportion of World population in 1950, increased by 2002 with 2% and estimated to approach 20% in 2050. In 1950 maximum proportion for World population was contributed from China, strikingly, its figures for proportion of population was remain maximum as compared to other countries, while in 2050 India will overtake the China in case of percentile of global population.

Probing further, to the remaining data, the proportion of World population from United States of America was observed as 5% in 2002, estimated to remain same in 2050, whereas USA gives 7% population's proportion to the world population in the initial year. In Japan percentage of population for whole world population was 4% and 3% in 1950 and 2002 respectively. Eventually, it is estimated that Japan will contribute only tiny proportion to population in 2050 accounted as only 1%.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 3.97073170732 504% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21296296296 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95228109245 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50462962963 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2971708828 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.75 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355089374191 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196453596726 0.103423049105 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708468977016 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251111352326 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286700223777 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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