The bar chart shows the result of survey conducted by personal department at a major company.The survey was carried out on two groups of works: those aged from 18- 30 and those aged 45to 60, and shows factor affecting there wirk performance.
The bar chat below shows the result of survey conducted by a personal depatment at a major company the survey was carried out on two groups of worker: those aged from 18-30and those aged 45 to60 and shows factors affecting there work performance.
The given layout provides the information about the external and internal factors,affecting the work performance of two group of workers and survey conducted by personnal department.data also colaborated in percentum.
It can be seen that there are main internal factors; team spirit,comptent with boss and others.Both age groups equally effected by team spirt.Moreover 53% youngest loose their performance because they want to respect from their collegues.secondly age group 45-60 less effected from these components except to youngests.
Apart from all these some external factors effected performance .job security is less effected to age group of olders.As well as yongest much effected by the personal development factor .At least82% yongest workers have week performance ,because of the promotion prospects;only 50%ratio of olders effected by this aspect.
overall ,it is evidence that mostly extrnal factors are effected performance of workers .although personal development effect very much to youngests and money is effecting elders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... are main internal factors; team spirit,comptent with boss and others.Both age groups eq...
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Suggestion: Both
...am spirit,comptent with boss and others.Both age groups equally effected by team spi...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...e groups equally effected by team spirt.Moreover 53% youngest loose their performance be...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...e groups equally effected by team spirt.Moreover 53% youngest loose their performance be...
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Suggestion: 53% the youngest
...equally effected by team spirt.Moreover 53% youngest loose their performance because they wa...
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Suggestion: lose
...ted by team spirt.Moreover 53% youngest loose their performance because they want to ...
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...me external factors effected performance .job security is less effected to age gro...
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...is less effected to age group of olders.As well as yongest much effected by the pe...
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...ected by the personal development factor .At least82% yongest workers have week pe...
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...2% yongest workers have week performance ,because of the promotion prospects;only ...
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Suggestion: Overall
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Suggestion: ,
...olders effected by this aspect. overall ,it is evidence that mostly extrnal fact...
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...by this aspect. overall ,it is evidence that mostly extrnal factors are effected...
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...tors are effected performance of workers .although personal development effect ver...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, at least, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92715231788 4.92477711251 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31071518725 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655629139073 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3878994678 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 223.75 112.824112599 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.75 22.9334400587 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.0 5.23603664747 363% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139391093864 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856781428638 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031557744178 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856781428638 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031557744178 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 13.2329268293 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.0 61.2550243902 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.71 11.4140731707 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.06136585366 128% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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