The bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994.
The given histograms highlights the information about the statistical data of both marriage and divorce had shown by 8 countries: ( USA, UK, japan, finland, Germany, france, Italy and Denmark) in the year 1981 and 1994. The data is calibrated in per thousand people.
Overall, it is evident that there was drop in marriage rate from all countries, but not in the case of Denmark. USA had highest both divorce and marriage statistic in both years.
It can be seen that, in the year of 1981, USA had the peak marriage rate, whereas Denmark had the least. Moreover, UK, Japan, finland, Germany showed the marriage statistic above 6 thousand people which were 7, 6.5, 6.3 and 6.1 respectively. Apart from all this, there was significant rise in the marriage rate in Denmark by 1.8 thousand people, whereas 6 countries: UK, Japan, Finland, Germany, France and Italy had faced considerable fall in the marriage statistic.
Moving further, in the case of Germany, divorce rate had remained leveled off, whereas 5 countries: uk, japan, France and Italy had faced a slight rise in divorce rate in the period of time. Because of high divorce rate shown by the USA as well as UK in both years, USA always stood first and UK second.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, well, whereas, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53132752674 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6851823597 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161180078928 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813105402723 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557261997146 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118918807549 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358675492787 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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