The bar graph depicts the information about the worldwide sales in billions of dollars of various kinds of electronic games from 2000 to 2006.
It is vividly seen that, handheld games had experienced highest spread all over the world in the all years given, whereas the mobile games was not used by people, while in 2002, it used under just $5 billions and last four years were incline.
Moving further, in the first period, console games more popular for global sales at exactly $6 billions, whilist after six years were fall down the figure given. Furthermore, in 2002, online games was not sales in ,whereas after all the year increase dramatically and the last year sales near to $ 6.5 billions of dollars.
Overall, according to figure given handheld games were more popular for sales in the all over the world and peaked at last year $ 18 billions of dollars, whereas least global sales online games in the last six year.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'experienced the highest'.
Suggestion: experienced the highest
...s vividly seen that, handheld games had experienced highest spread all over the world in the all ye...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...st spread all over the world in the all years given, whereas the mobile games was not...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eople, while in 2002, it used under just billions and last four years were inclin...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'inclined'.
Suggestion: inclined
...just billions and last four years were incline. Moving further, in the first period...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...more popular for global sales at exactly billions, whilist after six years were f...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., in 2002, online games was not sales in ,whereas after all the year increase dram...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$6'.
Suggestion: $6
...tically and the last year sales near to $ 6.5 billions of dollars. Overall, acco...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 billion'.
Suggestion: 5 billion
...lly and the last year sales near to $ 6.5 billions of dollars. Overall, according to figur...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$18'.
Suggestion: $18
... over the world and peaked at last year $ 18 billions of dollars, whereas least glob...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '18 billion'.
Suggestion: 18 billion
...ver the world and peaked at last year $ 18 billions of dollars, whereas least global sales onl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, whereas, while, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87974683544 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24233938945 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.5733948426 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.2 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 5.23603664747 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241580799928 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162556917102 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106784078509 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183548513305 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111430858444 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.