The bar graph shows the type of transport preferences among young people from different countries.
The bar graph illustrates information about the percentage of various vehicles importance among youth from different countries.Overall,the car has most preffered vehicle in four countries,while the second most importance is for both motorcyce and bicycle where it has slight difference.
In france they are about 75% of people like to drive car,being preffered more than motorcycle and bicycle.Germany preference was roughly same for bicycle and car,where the motorcycle is about 17%.In usa,60% of people interested to drive car where as for motorcycle 30% of people and for bicycle has 10% of people.Great britain has almost 45% of people like to drive car rather than commute motorcycle.However,bicycle is about 50% of people like to drive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...re about 75% of people like to drive car,being preffered more than motorcycle and bicy...
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...ffered more than motorcycle and bicycle.Germany preference was roughly same for bicycle...
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...nce was roughly same for bicycle and car,where the motorcycle is about 17%.In usa,60% ...
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...d car,where the motorcycle is about 17%.In usa,60% of people interested to drive c...
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...a,60% of people interested to drive car where as for motorcycle 30% of people and for bi...
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...eople and for bicycle has 10% of people.Great britain has almost 45% of people like t...
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...rive car rather than commute motorcycle.However,bicycle is about 50% of people like to ...
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...r rather than commute motorcycle.However,bicycle is about 50% of people like to drive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 630.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 114.0 196.424390244 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52631578947 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.26757987692 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.81650527668 2.65546596893 144% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 22.4926829268 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 315.0 112.824112599 279% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 22.9334400587 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 5.23603664747 325% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168403723973 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138720105015 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562437576055 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138720105015 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562437576055 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 13.2329268293 250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 61.2550243902 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 10.3012195122 259% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.4329268293 262% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.9970731707 226% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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