The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days

Essay topics:

The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.

The bar chart illustrates the proportions of movie-goers in one European country on different days of the week from 2003 to 2007.
Overall, the number of people visiting the cinemas in that country witnessed a small fluctuation over the examined period. In addition, people there tend to go to the cinemas the most on weekend.
In 2003, the percentage of movie-goers was 10% on Monday, a third of that on Friday and Sunday while it reached a peak of 40% on Saturday. Over the next 2 years, there was a marginal increase of about 5% on three continuous days: Saturday, Sunday, and Monday. However, the year 2007 recorded a slight drop of about 3% on the same days and the highest point was nearly 44% on Saturday.
Looking at Tuesday, the number of cinema-goers was 20% but constantly decreased after 2 days and stopped at 13% on Thursday. Then, this figure rose considerably to 30% on the next day, which remained stable in 2005 and 2007. The proportion of people coming to the cinemas in 2005 decreased roughly from nearly 14% to below 10% on 2 days: Wednesday and Thursday. In contrast, that number over 2 years saw an increase of 4%.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, then, third, while, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65346534653 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65870621789 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4251843651 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.0 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269051518848 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959360871257 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942901979304 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173360403648 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105551325725 0.0819641961636 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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