Both charts illustrate the number of marriages and divorces which happen over the span of thirty years in the USA between 1970 and 2000 and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

Essay topics:

Both charts illustrate the number of marriages and divorces which happen over the span of thirty years in the USA between 1970 and 2000 and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

The reports of marriages and divorces between 1970 and 200 in the USA and the civil status of grown-up Americans in 1970 and 2000 are shown in the graphs. Overall, the decline of marriages was gradual along the given period while Divorces experienced fluctuation. In addition, married people had the largest proportion for both years( 1970 and 2000).

It witnessed a gradual decline in the number of marriages from 2.5 million (m) to 2m between 1970 and 2000; it remained same for the first two periods and began to fall down in 1990 until 2000. Meanwhile, the number of divorces faced a noticeable rise between 1970 and 1980 from 1m to around 1.5m and it started a drop in 1980 until 2000-it had the same value as in 1970.

The second bar chart illustrates the percentage of marital adults' American status in 1970 and 2000. Interestingly, married status occupied a major share of American people which were 70% and 59% in 1970 and 2000 respectively. Married and widowed statuses decreased from 70 and 9 to 59% and 5% respectively. On the contrary, people who never married and divorced increased in the same period of time.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ried and divorced increased in the same period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, while, in addition, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77948717949 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62694278628 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9244282053 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386905061301 0.215688989381 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160139299875 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105012839039 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250137454369 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381395361717 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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