The bread making process

Essay topics:

The bread making process

The given picture illustrates the steps in a production of bread in a bakery.
As can be seen from the process, it is clearly evident that the bread - making process involves a number of numerous stages. It begins with the processing of raw materials - water, sugar, yeast and end with the shape of bread.
At the beginning of the process, warm water and sugar poored into a vessel of yeast to be activated. Next, the first mixture and more water added with flour and salt, at which stage, dough is collected. Afterwards, the combination is kneaded during the period of 10 minutes to create a smooth and shiny blend.
In the next steps, the mixture is left to rise in a warm place from one to three hours. After this course, the blend is punched down to release air and is kneaded in a few minutes. In the final stage, shape loaves are created and they are risen for an hour oven 200 degree celcius from 10 to 15 minutes.

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Average: 7.3 (22 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44117647059 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31119825449 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.3329026636 43.030603864 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8888888889 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 5.23603664747 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257276029329 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969518427584 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143854091237 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158153291196 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17821491791 0.0819641961636 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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