(Cam 12 test 1): The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart gives information about the proportion of females and males who took part in frequent physical activity in different ages in Australia in 2010.
In general, it can be seen that women who are 45 to 54 and 15-24-years-old men accounted for the highest number in the period. The number of females in nearly all ages exercised more than males.
At 15-24 years old, over 5.0% male participants did physical activity more than female participants. The percentage of 25-34-year-old men enjoying exercising had a slight decrease while women started taking part in more than men, at 42.2% and 48.9% respectively. Males made up 13% of doing physical activity less than women.
Females who are from 45 to 64 years old, had the highest figure of doing exercises from 53% 53.3%, the figures for men in the same age groups were much lower. Finally, both over 65-year-old women and men had the same proportion of taking part in physical activity, at nearly 47%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... In general, it can be seen that women who are 45 to 54 and 15-24-years-old men accoun...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n female participants. The percentage of 25-34-year-old men enjoying exercising h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87804878049 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72284603703 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5713903789 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23719863102 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111237860942 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636096373589 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158285688415 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680688434945 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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