Cambridge 10 test 1 task 1 The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mai

Essay topics:

Cambridge 10 test 1 task 1: The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts give information about the proportion of different categories of energy used in Australian household and how they resulted in greenhouse gas emissions.

It can be clearly seen that in the first chart heating accounted for the highest percentage of energy in used, while cooling made up the lowest. Additionally,greenhouse gas emissions in Australia were caused mainly by wwater heating and other applicances.

Among all kinds of energy used, heating and water heating consituted much higher percentage than the others, at 42% of the former and 30% of the latter.Australian used a very small proportion of total energy consumed in refrigeration, lighting, and cooling, at 7%,4%,2% sequentially. Less than a fifth percentage of that figure was used by other appliacances.

However, water heating was the most effective factor which caused greenhouse gas emissions, making up 32%. Both heating and refrigation accounted for a similar percentage, at about less than a fifth percentage. The proportions of lighting and cooling were 8% and 3% in respective, much lower than that of other appliances at 28%.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , greenhouse
...cooling made up the lowest. Additionally,greenhouse gas emissions in Australia were caused ...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Australian
...42% of the former and 30% of the latter.Australian used a very small proportion of total e...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re was used by other appliacances. However, water heating was the most effe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45142857143 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35203136705 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577142857143 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4637029547 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201307373456 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915279942249 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971811503802 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150840227761 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108592153124 0.0819641961636 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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