Cambridge 15 - Test 1 - Writing task 1
The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in give Australian cities
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The chart displays the results of a survey about how people bought and drank coffee and tea in five cities of Australia (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart).
Overall, the same point of five cities is that the highest percentage of city residents is people who went to a café for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks, the number of people used to buy instant coffee in last 4 weeks reached the second point and the lowest level is buying fresh coffee in last 4 weeks.
In Sydney, the proportion of people who bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks is nearly 48% and it is a lower level in Melbourne (44%). The number displayed this figure in Brisbane and Adelaide is in balance (approximately 35%). And in the last cities, Hobart has under 40%.
The second option is buying instant coffee in last 4 weeks. Sydney registered 46%. In Melbourne, there is an amount of 46%, lower than Brisbane (around 56%). This figure of Adelaide is just slightly under 50% while Hobart has 54%, a higher percent.
The last preference is buying fresh coffee in last 4 weeks. The chart shows there is 62% of people preferring to go to a café for coffee or tea. The highest point of this amount is Melbourne (nearly 63% in total) and it’s also the greatest level. Hobart has the same amount, as well (62,5%). The proportion increased sharply in two other countries (56% for Brisbane and 49% for Adelaide).
In conclusion, people in five Australian countries tend to have coffee or tea in a café and there was a significantly lower number of people who prefer fresh coffee.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ring to go to a café for coffee or tea. The highest point of this amount is Melbour...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 278.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59352517986 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41755790035 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446043165468 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.3546500911 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1333333333 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1707731629 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573411168443 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722966059777 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106904572748 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624378243705 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ring to go to a café for coffee or tea. The highest point of this amount is Melbour...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 278.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59352517986 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41755790035 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446043165468 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.3546500911 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1333333333 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1707731629 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573411168443 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722966059777 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106904572748 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624378243705 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.