The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph compares the hospital beds per thousand of the population in 8 countries , while the table gives information about government health spending
To be gin , it can seen very clearly that japan provided the highest number of hospitals hotel bed , at 14 per thousand of inhabitants. The second country that had 8 per thousand of population was germany , compared with more than 4 per thousand of population of spain . Finally Australia, Canada , netherlands , uk and us provided the lowest hospital beds with approximately 4 per thousand of inhabitants
According to the statistics of hunting and life expectancy in Japan , Netherlands and US , the largest health spending per person was US with 6,179$ expanding . However the life expectancy of US was just 78 age , which was shorter than other countries. Although Japan just expected 2,581 for healthy per person, it had higher average life expectancy than 2 countries. Meanwhile, Netherlands expected to live to be 80 and the government spent 3,481 for each citizens
Overall , Japan was the best place of he care and medical care . In thought, the Japan government spent less money for healthcare, there are far more beds available for patients , and people can expect to live longer there than in some other countries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11538461538 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85680775337 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552884615385 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8308505214 43.030603864 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.0 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946935983766 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508774777442 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038892097864 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676097957212 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606496112249 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.