The chart below gives information about the “Istanbul Promo plus” sales in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
<span style="font-size: 1.1em; white-space: normal;">The chart shows how the “Istanbul Promo plus” sales changed in 12 months of 2007. Generally, it can be observed that the Promo plus sales began at 200 million in January, as being ended up at 190 million by the end of the year. </span>
<p style="white-space: normal;"> However, in the first period from January to March, there is a prominent upward trend that makes the sales' stats increase dramatically from 200 million to 350 million. But surprisingly, right after that the trend suddenly is broken and keep falling for the next 4 months. So that in July, the Promo plus sales stayed at about 110 million, which is less than 240 million compared with March. August sales recorded a significant rise back to January levels as figures nearly doubled, but this was not to last as they dropped again in September to the same level as they were in July. October came with a small extension of about 100 million Turkish lira in sales, after which sales values leveled off and remained relatively static over the last two months of 2007. </p><p style="white-space: normal;">Overall, Promo Plus in Istanbul persisted moderately constant in 2007 as January and December sales were fairly equal. Also, sales were at their highest in March while the weakest sales figures could be recognized in July and September.</p>
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 965.302439024 216% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 366.0 196.424390244 186% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6912568306 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 3.73543355544 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23332576044 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.398907103825 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 0.9 1.45097560976 62% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 22.4926829268 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 304.815654672 43.030603864 708% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 347.166666667 112.824112599 308% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.0 22.9334400587 266% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0313747662495 0.215688989381 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737912086438 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109084959944 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0410218045141 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177604086664 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.9 13.2329268293 271% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.78 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.8 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.61 11.4140731707 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.4329268293 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.9970731707 240% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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