The provided bar chart illustrates the performance of Southland’s primary exports in 2000 and 2019. It also contains forecasted values for 2025.
Overall, it is possible to see that international tourism is projected to be the leading export industry in the future, although dairy exports will maintain much of its strength. Meat exports, however, are decreasing, and this is likely to continue in 2025.
According to the data, international tourism was the leading industry in 2000, earning just over $8 billion. In 2019, this figure has reached almost $9 billion. Experts estimate that this industry will earn as much as $10 billion by 2025.
Dairy products were the second largest export category in 2000, with $7 billion worth of exports, and a sizeable increase to almost $10 billion provides this category with the first position in 2019. Still, it is expected that dairy exports will drop slightly by 2025, to around $9.5 billion.
Meat exports are the third key export industry in Southland, but their value dropped from $6 billion in 2000 to $5.5 billion in the current year. It is expected that meat exports will shed some $500 million more, sliding to $5 billion by 2025.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, so, still, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13020833333 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64057363527 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552083333333 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3010272453 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5454545455 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159080428504 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709889375478 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053331229385 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106742092969 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702300603928 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.