The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010

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The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010

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The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant



Submitted by Orifjon Soatboyev on Mon, 01/11/2021 - 09:33
The chart shows the information the number of Britians that help to poor people by giving financial support by age range from 1990 to 2010.

According to the chart, the main support given by 36-50 ages approximately 42% in 1990. Unfortunately, the 18-25 years old people gave the least donation over 15 percentage. Other age categories portion remained nearly similar in the given year ( 1990).
In 2010, there were change the percentage of charity. The most people hepled by 51-65 years old people's group and the lowest percentage was between 18-25 ages about 40% and over 5%.
Overall, it is clear that a percentage of British people gave more money to charity in 1990 than they did in 2010. In addition, elder people donated more for charity that younger people

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1746031746 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55670320959 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597883597884 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 148.29278472 43.030603864 345% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.25 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.609391170158 0.215688989381 283% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206381593923 0.103423049105 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157101722182 0.0843802449381 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293395231053 0.15604864568 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.22287048721 0.0819641961636 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.4329268293 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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