the chart below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

Essay topics:

the chart below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The bar chart provides the information about the percentage of accommodation in owned and rented households in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Overall, in the beginning, the percentage of owned accommodation was less than rented accommodation, but, at the end, rented accommodation was outraged by owned accommodation. Moreover, both types of lodgings experienced fluctuation between the time period.

In the first year, the percentage of owned accommodation was about 24%. Then, in 1939 and 1953, the percentage remained constant which was about 32%. Similarly, it experienced a grad...

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Average: 7.3 (8 votes)

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...l 2001, the percentage of rented housing was declining to its lowest by slightly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, moreover, similarly, then, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56756756757 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17613452694 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518918918919 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1104863453 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8333333333 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397475730486 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16228945433 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164681114705 0.0843802449381 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318944403317 0.15604864568 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200330322888 0.0819641961636 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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