The chart below show the population size in two countries in Uk from 1700 to 2000.

Essay topics:

The chart below show the population size in two countries in Uk from 1700 to 2000.

The bar chat illustrate the number of residents and the proportion of birth and death in England and Wales in the years between 1700 to 2000.

Overall, there was a significant rise in the population size in the countries given over 4 centuries. While the figures for the second chart appeared to decrease, birth rates were much higher than death rate during period shown.

In 1700, the number of inhabitants in England and Wales was only 5 millions. This number doubled after a century to 10 millions, followed by a significant increase to over 25 millions and 40 millions in the years of 1900 and 2000, respectively.

In terms of birth and death rate in two countries, in the initial stage, the figures for birth and death proportion were 25 and 30 per 1000 people. These numbers peaked in 1800 to nearly 38 and 31 per 1000 people prior to witnessing a free fall in the final stage. The gap between birth and death rate, in contrast, remained relatively stable at 5 per 1000 people until it was about triple of that of previous period when death rate seemed to drop more drastically.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69948186528 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.530715497 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564766839378 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.234479436 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.375 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102961141758 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521426759476 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516432638942 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720409043879 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411160185801 0.0819641961636 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.