The chart below show the sleep patterns of people in five different occupations to a Canadian study

The table chart illustrates the sleeping habits of students, truck drivers, full-time mothers, business executives, and doctors based on a Canadian investigation.

As the chart outlines, the students possess excess sleeping hours; whereas, the medical professional obtain the least amount of sleep out of 24 hours.

In detail, students get 8 hours of sleep continuously without any interruption, from 11 p.m. to 7:00 a.m. remaining 16 hours, they utilise for other activities. Similarly, full-time mothers sleep the same amount of time; however, they are interrupted twice in their habitual sleeping patterns, interference is 1:00 a.m. to 2:00 a.m. and 6:00 a.m. to 1 p.m. between resuming their sleep again.

Businesspeople and truck operators hold six hours of sleep a day. Business magnets get an uninterrupted sleep from 11 p.m. to 5:00 a.m., while truck drivers sleep 3 hours continuously from 7 a.m. to 10:00 a.m. before having three more hours sleep which starts from 4 p.m. to 7:00 p.m. in the middle of the time they are awake and do their routines. In terms of doctors, they sleep only 5 hours that too having one hour gap in the middle, which ranges 12:00 a.m. to 7:00 a.m.

Votes
Average: 7.2 (2 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, similarly, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06091370558 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76122535883 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604060913706 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 3.36585365854 386% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2980607269 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.428571429 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128402671784 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727024848812 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325832781562 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961709742136 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226848710783 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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