The chart below shows the annual pay thousands of US dollars for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004

The given chart illustrates the yearly salary for physicians and workers in other fields (measured in US dollars) in 7 Western countries in 2004. The first impression observed from the chart is that the income each year for medical practitioners and other workers in America was the highest among all the surveyed countries. It is also evident that the yearly income for physicians was higher than that for employees in other profession regardless of nations.

With regardless to the yearly income of doctors, the figure for medical practitioners in the US accounting for 120 thousand US dollars was the highest among all the surveyed nations while the opposite was true for that in Finland standing at 50 thousand US dollars. Besides, the budget paying for physicians in Switzerland was exactly the same with that in France, with the figure amounting to 70 thousand dollars each. That in another studied countries was nearly the same, composing around 65 thousand dollars each.

Considering the wage for employees in other professions in the US making up for 45 thousand dollars was the highest all regardless of nations, followed by that in Switzerland and France, which was 40 and 30 thousand dollars, respectively. Finally, the salary for worker in other fields each year in Finland was 5 thousand dollars higher than that in 3 other areas.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lars higher than that in 3 other areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08558558559 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72181306751 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45045045045 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.955855799 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.125 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337150059796 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18354680265 0.103423049105 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748930998942 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257973693578 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180567169569 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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