The chart below shows the average hours worked per day by married men and women in paid employment.Summarise The information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics: The chart below shows the average hours worked per day by married men and women in paid employment.
Summarise The information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart describes that the average hours worked per day by marriage couple in paid employment.

The several hours work by paid work in the husbands group aged 24 to 44 is similar as the husbands group aged 45 to 64 in paid work group.

wives group aged 45 to 64 is slightly higher than the wives group aged 24 to 44 in paid work group.

On the other hand, in unpaid work at home group, wives aged 24 to 44 are the highest among other groups.

However, both wives aged 24 to 44 and 45 to 64 groups are higher than other groups, and the wives group aged 45 to 64 is slightly higher than the wives group aged 24 to 44.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Wives
...up aged 45 to 64 in paid work group. wives group aged 45 to 64 is slightly higher ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 507.0 965.302439024 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 123.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12195121951 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.92753237489 2.65546596893 73% => OK
Unique words: 50.0 106.607317073 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406504065041 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 136.8 283.868780488 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2738791417 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103225332379 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107651826146 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127268706533 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107651826146 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127268706533 0.0819641961636 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.42 61.2550243902 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.91 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 40.7170731707 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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