The line graph provides information about the variation of crimes like burglary, Car theft and robbery in the Manchester City Centre between 2003 and 2012.
overall, it is clearly evident that all the three crime rates showed fluctuations.
At first sight, it is vivid that in 2013, burglary crime secured the first position with approximately 3400 cases followed by the crime of car theft and robbery with 2300 and 680 cases respectively. After one-year crime related burglary reached the peak and then it declined continuously in upcoming years. In the middle of 2006, Car theft crime rate crossed burglary.
Analysing the remaining data which assert that after 2008, the car theft crime rate was increasing year by year and in 2012cases related to this crime was around 2700 whilst on the other side Robbery rates almost constant over the period with 600 cases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... three crime rates showed fluctuations. At first sight, it is vivid that in 2013...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0979020979 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45503352189 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629370629371 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0936327497 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17155957143 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958945176703 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745963163931 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126587297775 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755987825397 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.