The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries.
The column chart reveals three challenges that three age groups face when they start living in other countries. Overall, we can see that there is a significantly different level of difficulties between age groups meet. Regarding the chart, people who are 18-34-year-olds mostly face the problem of making a friend, while people aged over 55-year-old mainly suffer the problem of learning the local language.
Looking at the chart, making friend accounts for the highest percent of the difficulties to the youngest age group when residing new countries, at 46% compared to 35% of people aged 35-54-year-old and 23% of the eldest age group, respectively. Similarly, 40% of people aged 18-54 encounter the problem of finding somewhere to live, while there is only 22% of over 55 year-olds meet this issue.
In contrast, the most concerned problem for elder people over 55 is learning the local language, at 54%, while this issue is a minor concern for the people aged 18-34. On the other hand, 35% of 35-54 year-olds live hard to live because of this problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...roups meet. Regarding the chart, people who are 18-34-year-olds mostly face the problem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, similarly, so, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03977272727 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72717210989 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585227272727 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9837909416 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.714285714 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194247368164 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110240026412 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105223056182 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149202426083 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653984281975 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.