The bar graph compares the cost of an average house in a period of 12 years from 1990 to that prices in 1989 in five various cities namely New York, Madrid, Tokyo, Frankfurt, London.
Overall, the average house prices in five cities had wide fluctuations. Between 1996 and 2002, the house prices of all the cities were higher than themselves in the previous 5 years and there was a drastically increased in 4 Western countries compared to the 1989 average.
According to the given data, though the house prices showed an upward trend, Tokyo was the only city that kept the prices lower than average prices from 1989, with 7.5% in 1990-1995 then increased 2.5% to exactly 5% in the following 5 years.
During 1996-2002 the price average property prices in the other cities were gradually rose and eventually all the cities showed the higher prices than that in 1989. In details, the figure for Frankfurt prices was stable at around 2.5% while the cost of an average home in Madrid rose by a further 2% to nearly 4%. Whereas, the biggest changes happened in London and New York when the prices climbed sharply over 20% and exactly 10% respectively from 1990.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
...ices in the other cities were gradually rose and eventually all the cities showed th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77227722772 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31797382358 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2556844332 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.714285714 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383898897882 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203342226277 0.103423049105 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794649281604 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263953088141 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303913867961 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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