The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles traveled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least

Essay topics:

The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles traveled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The chart illustrates on the numbers of injuries and incidents with the per number 100 million passenger miles who travelled(PMT) by different types of transportation in the year of 2002. A glance at the graph reveals that people were attacked with injuries and occurrence moderately by bus as well as overall the number of accidents was significantly higher than the number of injuries.

According to the given chart, In 2002 the bus and light rail transport occurred the same amount of injuries approximately 75 million passengers where in the bus the injuries amount were 60 million and 40 million were in light rail. Moreover, in the heavy railway transport, the injuries and incidents number were near about 50 million.

On the other hand, the commuter rail occurrence numbers were slightly the least commom position than the other three transport roughly 20 million commuters.

Last but not the least, the whole numbers of incident and injury in case of demand response the incidents amount were around 250 million and the number of injuries were nearly 170 million.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, well, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14772727273 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68960733255 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551136363636 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.7953096064 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301185149436 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175782534279 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955021054591 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189824923326 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680498392572 0.0819641961636 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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