The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rentedaccommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented
accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates the percentage of the households being rented and owned by people in their houses specifically in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Overall, households in owned accommodation are in increasing fashion from 1918 to 2011. Likewise, decreasing order of households percentage can be seen for rented accommodation across the same years. The year 1971 has the same percentage of households for both owned and rented houses.

The Highest percentage of households are in the year 1918 which is between 70% to 80%, in rented homes. Accommodation rented in 1939 and 1953 have approximately 68% of households. In the further years, a significant decline in percentage can be seen for rented houses until 2001 and Slight increase in percentage is shown from 2001 to 2011.

on the other hand, in 1918 owned accommodation has lowest percentage of household which is about 22%. The years 1939 and 1953 have identical percentage in owned places. After that, there is a decline trend until year 2001. Moreover, the households percentage in 1991 and 2001 are about the same which is around 31% for owned accommodation.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: On
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, moreover, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20540540541 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93924852379 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459459459459 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9527585722 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5454545455 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232106619534 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111051607803 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852534795716 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185418236254 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790933673739 0.0819641961636 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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