The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The graph illustrates the comparison of buying and renting accommodation in England and Wales, measured in percentage of households, in the 93 years period from 1918 to 2011.

Overall, it is clear that there was an upward trend in percentage of households in owned accommodation, whereas the figure of who rented accommodation witnessed an advert trend throughout the period.

Looking at details, it appears that the rented households had dropped slightly from 78% to just under 70% between 1918 and 1939, while the other had risen by about 10% from 20% to 32% in the same period. In addition, during the time from 1939 to 1953, both kinds of accommodation stayed relatively unchanged before having the same percentage in 1970 (50%).

Moreover, there was a dramatic increase in percentage of the former ones and it jumped at peak at nearly 70% at 2001. In contrast, the later ones experienced a gradual decline to just above 30% in 1981 and 2001. In 2011, the number of families owing their home were approximately twice as that of who just rented home at 63% and 35%, respectively.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 298, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...ome were approximately twice as that of who just rented home at 63% and 35%, respec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92391304348 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83258033287 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3331262934 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.428571429 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243934962376 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100397337049 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802367005563 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151624577854 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715506904874 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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