The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compares the proportion of England’s and Wales’s families possessing a house and those living in a rented property from 1918 to 2011.
Overall, living in owned accommodation was a growing popularity among households in England and Wales, while the percentage of households in rented accommodation witnessed a downward trend throughout the period shown.
Between 1918 and 1953, starting at over one-fifth, the proportion of those buying themselves a house experienced an increase of 10% in the next 21 years then leveled off until 1953 before rising steadily and reaching its record high in 2001, at under 70%. Surprisingly, over a decade, the figure for households locating in owned area declined by a mere 6%, to nearly two-third at the end of the period.
By 1961, the percentage of families living in rented property had gone down roughly one-tenth from a large portion of 78% and had subsequently remained stable in 14 years. Locating in hired accommodations became less favorable since the figure for households in those places saw a considerable fall from 1961 to 1991. Interestingly, in 1971, half of English’s and Wales’s population owned their houses, while the remaining preferred to live in rented properties. After hitting the lowest point in 2001, there was finally a recovery in the proportion of renters 10 years later.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21917808219 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9921465424 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598173515982 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.8740889116 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.875 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194528871966 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08308612007 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686100513011 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134366755682 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619798768956 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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