The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about the visitors count at a specific museum between 1995 and 2012, classified into three categories.
In terms of household, the adults visitor to the developing visitors museum. However, it is noteworthy that the majority of households experimented decreasing over the last year period, with the exception of 2007 and 1997, saw a steady growth. It is more clearly if we look at the specific decline.
Look at the bar chart in three areas, it can be seen that, the visitors museum of adults visitors in 2007 is highest among three areas about 400,500, providing visitors of museum in a specific households. Although, the visitors ( age under 15) has a significant decrease about 82,300. Meanwhile, the visitors of special exhibition four years have the low data and last for one year between 28,000-42,000. The other years is 2002 in households is adults visitors and visitors aged under 15 below 350,000 about 302,200 ( adults) and 110,000 ( under 15)
Look at the bar chart in last two year is 1997 and 2002. The adults visitors has a significantly increased and higher more than 1997 ( 400,500) and 1997 is lowest among four year about 300,100 people. During the following quarter, the special exhibition visitors is lowest among three areas ( 28,000). So, it can be seen that visit museum is tempt many adults than other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...ategories. In terms of household, the adults visitor to the developing visitors muse...
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Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...d decreasing over the last year period, with the exception of 2007 and 1997, saw a steady growth. It ...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'visitors'' or 'visitor's'?
Suggestion: visitors'; visitor's
...n three areas, it can be seen that, the visitors museum of adults visitors in 2007 is hi...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'household'?
Suggestion: household
...viding visitors of museum in a specific households. Although, the visitors age under 15 h...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cific households. Although, the visitors age under 15 has a significant decrease ...
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Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ged under 15 below 350,000 about 302,200 adults and 110,000 under 15 Look at th...
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Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...50,000 about 302,200 adults and 110,000 under 15 Look at the bar chart in last ...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntly increased and higher more than 1997 400,500 and 1997 is lowest among four ye...
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Line 4, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion visitors is lowest among three areas 28,000. So, it can be seen that visit mu...
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Line 4, column 339, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tempted'.
Suggestion: tempted
...So, it can be seen that visit museum is tempt many adults than other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96460176991 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61304821776 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495575221239 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.772872561 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.063786473485 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286635069596 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324401167982 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552302858171 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344643944804 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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