The chart below shows the percentages of industry sector's contribution in the economy of India and Turkey in 2000.
The pie charts depict how eight different industrial sectors contributed to India and Turkish economy percentage-wise in the year 2000.
Overall, it can be manifested that the Indian economy got the highest contribution from agriculture and the lowest from the construction sector. whereas, in Turkish, Heath care and Education share more to turkey's economy and least was spent by finance.
Firstly, agriculture was observed highest contributor to the economy of India which comprised almost a quarter(24%).other distribution from Government and Trade sectors have an only 2% which was 12% and 14% respectively. The construction, manufacturing and finance share towards Indian economy were below 10 per cent that accounted for 3%, 8% and 5%. Interestingly, the spending on finance, health and education had an equal percentage that was 17%.
In contrast, In Turkey, the health and education sector contributed the highest ratio that was 17% The agriculture sector had 14% more compare to India comprised 10%. Manufacturing, Trade, utilities and transportation which were lowest in India had a higher proportion of share for Turkish's economy. which was accounted for 12% and 16% respectively.where as, Government, leisure and hospitality had the lowest proportion for Turkish economy compare to India that was 9% and 18%.Finance was the only sector shown least proportion in both the country.However, only 2 % higher than India.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...he lowest from the construction sector. whereas, in Turkish, Heath care and Education s...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'observed the highest'.
Suggestion: observed the highest
...by finance. Firstly, agriculture was observed highest contributor to the economy of India whi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...oportion of share for Turkishs economy. which was accounted for 12% and 16% respectiv...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 350, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... accounted for 12% and 16% respectively.where as, Government, leisure and hospitality ha...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 479, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finance
...my compare to India that was 9% and 18%.Finance was the only sector shown least proport...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 507, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'shown the least'.
Suggestion: shown the least
... 9% and 18%.Finance was the only sector shown least proportion in both the country.However,...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 550, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...wn least proportion in both the country.However, only 2 % higher than India.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59633027523 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32332895383 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545871559633 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0048498782 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.555555556 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30219612495 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135957518813 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115876634447 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223311604884 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125147624049 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...he lowest from the construction sector. whereas, in Turkish, Heath care and Education s...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'observed the highest'.
Suggestion: observed the highest
...by finance. Firstly, agriculture was observed highest contributor to the economy of India whi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...oportion of share for Turkishs economy. which was accounted for 12% and 16% respectiv...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 350, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... accounted for 12% and 16% respectively.where as, Government, leisure and hospitality ha...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 479, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finance
...my compare to India that was 9% and 18%.Finance was the only sector shown least proport...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 507, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'shown the least'.
Suggestion: shown the least
... 9% and 18%.Finance was the only sector shown least proportion in both the country.However,...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 550, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...wn least proportion in both the country.However, only 2 % higher than India.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59633027523 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32332895383 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545871559633 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0048498782 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.555555556 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30219612495 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135957518813 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115876634447 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223311604884 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125147624049 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.